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BG was a little too loud

It isn't a HUGE deal, it's just makes your voice hard to hear. Also, speak up! It sounds like he's saying it with the captain watching or something. The laugh was a little weak.

Good voice, though. *thumbs up*

regardless of the faults, it's a solid submission, good luck in the contest!

bigjonny13 responds:

Thanks mate, glad you enjoy it.

Not Bad!

Good atmosphere in the BG, makes it like yer on a boat.

The voice you used sounds like an older pirate. You lose the voice at the end, but it's all good.

Definitely a good submission! Good luck in the contest.

A little boring

Good chord playing! It sounds solid, but it doesn't really hold my attention very long. Good ambience music, however!

9/10 for it not being very exciting

but

5/5 because it's still a good song

himenow responds:

It's not really a song, more like a test, but thanks :)

Eh.

The Bad:
The guitars have the reverb WAY too high for my personal tastes

You are off-time a lot, not by a large increment, but still off, nothing a quick re-take can't cure

The drums are a little quiet, but that doesn't take too much from the song, it's just we're all missin' out on that kick!

The guitars are off a little from time to time, as stated before, nothing a retake can't cure :)

However: Your distortion is muuuuddy! It's probably because of the reverb you have going, but sheesh. The rhythm is practically buzzing noises and the leads are the only real distinguishable notes, not very clean, but with some experimentation you can clear it all up, but keep it heavy! Try high volume instead of high gain.

The Good:

Beautiful harmonies are played (until you miss a note, but it is usually only 1 note)

The rhythm riffs guide the song along, not to mention it is structured very well. No random jumps or confusing bridges.

It isn't bad.

Over-all:

A pretty average post, that's not a bad thing, but it is mainly average because of the distortion of those guitars, and the volumes of your instruments. Just keep tweaking it, when you get the volumes right, trust me, you'll know. Then make a mental note of it, or even better: save the settings, that way you wont have to do it again!

As a fellow guitarist I can say confidently that you have great potential if you practice more, keep rockin'!

\m/

himenow responds:

Average post my ass.
Great post. Thanks, bro :D

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